lunes, 13 de octubre de 2014
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I admire my father because he possesses some incredible qualities. He is a counsel and works hard every day because he loves his job. He is also good at tennis and he taught me to play when I was a child. When I lost some tennis competitions and was put off, he always encouraged me to achieve my ambitions. Although he looks like a serious person, he has a good sense of humour and he is always playing on tricks. He is a fashion-conscious person, therefore, together go shopping and he suggests me some clothes. Apart from this, he and I talk about everything and he give me suggestions about all of my problems. Thanks him I have become the person who I am today.
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Nice post, but we should correct some mistakes here:
ResponderEliminar* I will describe my father (no TO here)
*But though ???? (it doesn't make sense)
*he is a fantastic person.
* I admire him (no TO here either)
* he works hard as a lawyer every day ("hardly" isn't good in this context)
* he loves what does (no "it")
* he always says
* that I do what I like most, even if this is difficult
* he has been a good tennis player for many years
*he taught me
* I took part in some competitions
* He has always helped me in everything
* I have becOme what I am nowadays.